Sunday, April 27, 2014

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 48

Hello everyone !

Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

On Friday I won Camp NaNoWriMo with 100715 words, I finished Blue Angel's draft. I wrote a complete draft of Dark Druids and I got some couples of hundred words for a new novel which doesn't have a title yet. It was a good writing month for me, I hope to have a lot more of them but I'm planning something totally new once I'm back from holiday. Today, I'm having fun in Hong Kong.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get rid of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. Kelpie had just ask Kallisto if he has already told her about Kordelius' ugliness. Seti is still around listening to their conversation. Kelpie is going straight to the point. Seti wanted to run away, but still decided to stay. Kelpie continues to tell Kallisto she should married her so she decided to give him a love test. Kallisto asked him: "What do you love about me?" Seti's answered in his head, then we saw Kelpie's answer to Kallisto and the argument that follows. Let's see what will happen now that Kelpie is gone. 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start just where we left of.

She stayed few seconds staring at the sky waiting for an answer which didn’t come, before walking away back to the house. Seti looked at her until she disappeared inside and stayed a bit longer. He knew she wasn’t coming back, once she was in for the night, she was never coming back out.
“I’m sorry,” he muttered, “I can’t see you again, this thing in me is too dangerous. I would die if I ever hurt you.”
He lay on the sand his head on this arm and his fingers playing in the water. He didn’t know if he felt happy or sad, it was kind of a strange mixture. It seemed that so much was happening in her life, and he had just brought more, but still she had space for him, and she wanted to see him and she liked him.

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  1. I so want this to work for them. Great writing!

  2. Poor Seti. I feel so bad for him. I do hope he goes back -- or that she finds a way to go to him.

  3. Seti is such a sweetie...he just doesn't recognize that about himself. Hope it works for these two!

  4. I wish Seti had more trust in himself and in her, but I love that she never gives up. Excellent excerpt!