Sunday, January 19, 2014

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 34

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In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get rid of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. Kelpie had just ask Kallisto if he has already told her about Kordelius' ugliness. Seti is still around listening to their conversation.

Here are my 8 sentences, we start just where we left of. 
Game version of Seti and Kallisto

“You can’t really marry a guy like that. It is too horrible,” Kelpie continued.
Seti nodded in agreement, he was shaking just thinking about it. Kallisto hadn’t been listening for the main part of Kelpie’s rant, it was always the same. She was even mimicking him to amuse the fairies when he was away.
“And you will have to go to the Fairy World forever and never come back here, it’s not really the best place to be, especially that you kind of like humans as strange as that is,” Kelpie said.
“She is going to leave,” Seti said out loud as to make the thought disappear from his head by blowing the words out, “She is going to leave.”
The thought tore a hole in his heart and he had trouble to focus on the rest of Kelpie’s talk.

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  1. Awww... Poor Seti. I hope he gets the courage to go back to her.

  2. One chance out between two worlds.
    What will it be?
    At some point, everyone faces a decision of great importance that will impact the rest of their life.
    How many chances do we get?
    Well done.

  3. Aw, such emotion. Lovely snippet heartfelt and beautifully written.

  4. "The thought tore a hole in his heart..." Love that line, Linda. Kallisto is being a brat! Good 8 :-)

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  5. OK at least Seti is paying attention. Now take ACTION, dude! Enjoying the story, another excellent snippet!

  6. Aww...he's hurting so much. Great eight. I just love that last line.

  7. I like the characters at the point of decision. You will have to go to the Faerie World and never come back. Just like marriage. You go to the married world and you can never come back. At least not the same. I will have to read more. Nice.

  8. SO much love and emotion and humor. Charming eight.

  9. If he doesn't do something soon he's going to lose her, methinks.

  10. Seti's pain comes through, but watch you verb use.