Sunday, October 28, 2018

WeWriWar 267: Demon Soul

Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday
Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....

Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite. Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn wrong...

Let's start right where we left off.  

She looked through her wardrobe. 

I need to look like a demon or a witch or something, I need to look bad enough so that nobody will try to annoy me, hum, let’s see…

She took out dark clothes. She had a pretty nice dress but trousers would feel more comfortable. She also had a large deep blue cloak with a large hood, so her face would be concealed. The more difficult task would be to hide her smell. Demons had a much more powerful sense of smell and if she smelt like a human, alone in there, that would be the end of her. She walked to the bathroom adjacent to her room and took a look at her bottles of perfume. That would never be enough.

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  1. Good strategy to avoid anyone wanting to annoy her. :-) I wonder what she'll do about the human scent, though.

  2. I love all her meticulous planning! I hope she doesn't have to dump all that perfume over herself though! Great snippet....

  3. I love how all the perfume isn't enough. It demonstrates how powerful their sense of smell is.

  4. Interesting! I wonder how she's going to cover her smell.