Sunday, August 19, 2018

WeWriWar 258: Demon Soul

Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday

Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....

Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite. Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn wrong...

Let's start right where we left off.  

They had been to several stores and Yue had bought his stuff.
“Why didn’t you buy all that at the first shop?” she asked. “It’s such a waste of time.”
“Well, it’s safer if no one knows the complete list of ingredients. You see, I prefer when nobody knows what I’m doing,” he answered.
“And what are you doing exactly?” she asked again giving him a suspicious look.

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  1. Good thought, if a bit paranoid, from Yue, about not letting anyone know the full list of ingredients! Enjoyed the snippet!

  2. I agree. He probably should be paranoid.

  3. I like his reasoning! Well thought through.