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Sunday, March 13, 2016

WeWriWar 146: Rainbow Catcher


Welcome to a new excerpt of Rainbow Catcher for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday

Now let's go back to our story.

Summary of previous episodes: Clarissa is coughing and wanted to watch Everett Cooper on TV but Jason refused, she is due to get her rainbow the next day but she seems scared, to make her feel better Jason leave the TV on. Clarissa tried to explain about rainbows, she is a big fan of Everett Cooper but Jason is not too sure about it. Clarissa complained about her dialophone but Jason needs to go to work. Before completely leaving he is thinking about getting her her rainbow. We flashed back to the meeting Jason had with a rainbow seller at the black market. Jason left Clarissa's room to go to work. Jason was talking to his boss about the rainbow coming the next day. Jason prepared the money for the rainbow in a sport bag and went to the hospital. The rainbow seller arrived for the delivery.

We start just where we left off last week.

“Oh no, they are to disgusting,” Clarissa answered hiding under the blanket playfully once more.
“I need to go back to the garage, kid, think carefully, don’t rush something like that, I’ll see you tonight,” Markus said.
Jason looked at him going out.
“Do you want to watch TV? The emission will start soon,” he said.
Clarissa nodded, looking at him. Something was clearly wrong, he normally complained that TV killed her brain’s cells faster than anything else. 

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15 comments:

  1. Love how she's so in tune with how her brother to know something is bothering him.

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  2. Nothing like getting that sinking suspicion that something just isn't right...hope it's just a case of overactive paranoia!

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  3. Looks like she is in for a surprise when he gets back!

    Good to see you on the list!

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  4. I think he's right—TV does kill brain cells. ;-)

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  5. Such a cool concept- rainbows arriving for delivery!

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  6. The idea of selling rainbows in intriguing, but sounds like they cost a lot!

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  7. Ahhh, something is up! Maybe we'll find out what, next week. Thanks for the snippet.

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  8. She seems perceptive so maybe something is going on.

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  9. Children an always tell, can't they? Excellent snippet, no one's fooling her that there isn't something amiss here.

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  10. What emission? You've got me wondering. And I still wonder what these rainbows actually are!

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  11. Somehow I don't think Jason is going to take Markus' advice...

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  12. Uh oh, red flag on his part then. I wonder what he's brewing up in his head.

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  13. She can read him all right. Nice snippet.

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  14. He does seem to be worried about something her health again considering all she's been through

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