Sunday, April 5, 2015

WeWriWar 97 Demon and Fairy

Welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

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In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to “It is the first time the Chaos manifested,” Seti’s father answered clenching his fists. “Then it is bad luck, he shouldn’t have been born in the first place, and he shouldn’t have stayed alive once born. Now, you can start blaming yourself for everything that is going to happen if he lets you live long enough to see it. We can’t be sure.” The man said without even looking back. He followed his companion through the corridor to the kitchen door. her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Seti managed to open a hole in the wall while keeping the Chaos away, but how long can he stay in control? 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Seti had stopped to wait and see what the others would do.

Something felt down from the tree, Kallisto heard the sound of something going down in the branches. It seemed heavy. She stood up in a jump and left her flute to the fairies. Seti felt down unconscious near her feet. Kallisto smiled seeing that it was him before realizing that he didn’t seem well. 
She sat near him on the floor and almost passed her hand on his forehead before remembering what he had said: “It’s just dangerous to touch me, if you touch me, something bad can happen to you.” 
She wondered what so bad could happen to her, but he might have his reasons.

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  1. I hope nothing bad happens to her if he touches her. Enjoyed the snippet.

    Just wondering if in these two sentences below if you really meant fell and not felt. :)

    Something 'felt' down from the tree, Kallisto heard the sound of something going down in the branches.

    Seti 'felt' down unconscious near her feet.

  2. I wonder what would happen if she touched him...

  3. I hope she will touch him w/out anything bad happening.

  4. Scary. I would not want to touch him after that...

  5. Nicely done. I'd like to know what happens when they touch.

  6. That's a really interesting twist to things. Like everyone else, I want to know what happens when and if they touch.

  7. Hmmmm... intriguing piece of information.