Sunday, March 22, 2015

WeWriWar 95 Demon and Fairy

Welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

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In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to “It is the first time the Chaos manifested,” Seti’s father answered clenching his fists. “Then it is bad luck, he shouldn’t have been born in the first place, and he shouldn’t have stayed alive once born. Now, you can start blaming yourself for everything that is going to happen if he lets you live long enough to see it. We can’t be sure.” The man said without even looking back. He followed his companion through the corridor to the kitchen door. her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Seti managed to open a hole in the wall while keeping the Chaos away, but how long can he stay in control? 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Seti had stopped to wait and see what the others would do.

Seti closed his eyes for a second gathering his energy. He knew he was close. He just needed a little effort, just a little step further for the suffering to stop. He opened his eyes, the street was deserted. He stood up and elevated himself in the air. He flew really low to make sure nobody would notice him. The Chaos was pressuring his head more and more, unhappy to be carried away with him.
“But you have no choice, I’m the one making the choices no matter how much it hurts,” Seti thought giving himself courage as the Chaos raged.
He landed on the beach. 

And we all know what's going on when Seti is on the beach, right? Feeling relieved already? 

Answers to last week's comments

Needles in the brain is an image, it was not litteral seeing that Seti is still controlling his hands, but I have to admit that sounds really creepy like a hell of a headache.

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  1. I'm glad he's able to stand up to the Chaos.

  2. Yeah for Seti! I'm glad he's taking control!!

  3. He's taking control, good for him! I am glad to see that Seti is not giving in or giving up. Good snippet.

  4. He's been through a lot so I hope he can pull this off.

  5. I'm proud that he is standing up for himself against Chaos.

  6. Poor Seti! He needs to get Chaos out of his head as soon as possible.

  7. Good to see Seti asserting himself. Strong snippet.

  8. I'm glad Seti is making the choices for himself. A good development, nice snippet!

  9. Go Seti! ... and I can't wait to find out about the importance of the beach. :-)