Sunday, March 30, 2014

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 44

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Last week I though Kelpie had a point but apparently Kallisto doesn't see it that way. 
In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get rid of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. Kelpie had just ask Kallisto if he has already told her about Kordelius' ugliness. Seti is still around listening to their conversation. Kelpie is going straight to the point. Seti wanted to run away, but still decided to stay. Kelpie continues to tell Kallisto she should married her so she decided to give him a love test. Kallisto asked him: "What do you love about me?" Seti's answered in his head, then we saw Kelpie's answer to Kallisto.  

Here are my 8 sentences, we start just where we left of. (With creative punctuation to fit in.)
“I’m not saying I’m not important, I’m just saying I’m not that important, if I was you would also respect my choice,” she answered.
“Couldn’t you just tell me that you didn’t make up your mind yet?” Kelpie said.
“I told you I made up my mind already, so many times,” Kallisto answered getting annoyed. Kelpie was never going get it.
“So you prefer old fat Kordelius?” Kelpie answered with a ton of disgust.
“You know that’s not the point,” Kallisto answered.

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  1. Kelpie really is annoying, isn't he? I admire Kallisto's patience!

  2. Patience is a virtue! :) Kelpie does need to have it spelled out!

  3. It's nice of her to show such concern for his feelings. He hasn't the same sense toward answer to her question in itself. Nice.

  4. I feel like Seti, like a fly on the wall listening in waiting to see what's going to happen next. :)
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  5. So what is the point? Isn't love important? Will Kelpie and Kallisto figure it out?

  6. Oh whee, I can comment today! Yes, Kallisto is SO much more patient than I could be LOL. Fun snippet!

  7. Kelpie is wearing on her patience and I don't blame her.

  8. Kelpie can only see what Kelpie wants to see...and apparently only hears what he wants to hear as well.

  9. Certainly doesn't seem to have entered Kelpie's head that there might be any other choice.

  10. The poor guy is irritatingly slow, I hope he eventually comes through.