Sunday, December 15, 2013

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 30

Hello everyone, welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
This month I'm participating to NaNoFiMo and the draft of my new WIP Blue Angel is available here.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get ride of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. 

Here are my 8 sentence:

“She is going to tell him,” Seti thought half sad because he wanted to be her secret. She had been his for so long. But he also wanted to know if she was really thinking about him.
“I won’t tell you,” Kallisto said pulling her tongue out and rocking high on the swing using her legs to go faster.
“This is so unfair, I come all the way from the Fairy World to light up your miserable day in the more than boring Human World and you won’t even talk to me,” Kelpie said. It was his usual attack. Trying to make her feel like she owed him for coming to visit her, as if leaving the Fairy World was a burden. She generally indulged him for fun and because it made him happy, but not this time.

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  1. Kallisto is far more savvy that even her friends think she is. I like that! :D

  2. I love the playful dialogue. Nice excerpt!

  3. Go Kallisto! Don't let him guilt you into anything. I like her.

  4. Ooh, she's keeping the secret, I like that. Another fun snippet!

  5. Go Kallisto go. No one owns you. Lovely unusual tale/tail.

  6. Nice scene, but watch the head hopping.

  7. Kelpie is persistent. I'm not quite sure if I hope that she does tell him or if she doesn't.

  8. Hm, has he overstepped the mark a little? Love the playfulness of this story.