Sunday, October 6, 2019

WeWriWar 299: The House at the Crossing 4

 
Hello everybody and welcome for a new Sunday of writing with Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday!

I decided to change things a little bit so for the next few months, I'm going to present you my new WIP. It's called "The House at the Crossing" and it's a prequel to Demon Soul and the demon series. It's a bit of a mix of Fantasy and Science-fiction.
It follows one of the books more obscure character as she first come into the House. It's suppose to explain why there are so many people is the house and sort of where they come from and at the same time be a first time adventure for the main character as she needs to adapt to her new role and the new version of who she is. 

Since it's a WIP, and I still haven't finished the first draft, it's still really row. Hopefully, we'll see some improvement as it goes.


Let's start right at where we left off last week!


An other cab stops in front of the house and I get out of it, me, or a different version of me. We have the same hair style, the same crib. It's too big for one baby because it was made for twins, initially, just the father of my babies took my baby girl and flew with her to Argentina. I have no way of finding where they are and after spending all my money to do just that, I couldn't pay the rent anymore and since I was distracted, I also lost my job. So that's why I'm here.
The other version of me, she looks just like me, we also wear the same clothes, she is just looking more tired and she had calluses on her hands. She looks at me and it's like looking at myself. Except I don't feel like myself anymore.

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8 comments:

  1. This is a wild premise. :-) But I like it!

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  2. Wow, trippy but you explain it all very clearly and made me curious to know more. Great snippet!

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  3. Great hook! I don't understand it yet but I want to, and that'll keep me reading.

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  4. Great start to a story - drew me right in wanting to know more, such an interesting premise!

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  5. I'm confused but willing to read more to find out what's going on.

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  6. Wow ... quite a snippet. Interesting premise.

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