Sunday, March 24, 2019

WeWriWar 273: Demon Soul


Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday
 
Pre-Plot:
Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....

Plot:
Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite. Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn wrong...

Let's start right where we left off last week! 


Dark around the eyes, deep purple lips, messy hair, dressed all in black. Looking at herself in the mirror, she could have thought that she was someone else. Would that be enough for the demons not recognizing her as a human? With the fish’s smell, she stood a chance.
She went down to the kitchen, got some bread out of the cupboard and some jam for breakfast and made herself a cup of tea. While pressing the blade of the knife on the bread she paused and sighed; there was no need. Her stomach wouldn’t let her eat anything, she wasn’t in the mood for any food. She left the knife on the table; someone less stressed out would use it later.


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6 comments:

  1. Very convincing portrayal of her nervousness.

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  2. The details of her looks and smell and aversion to food combine to make this snippet even more compelling than usual.

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  3. Very believable that she wouldn't have any appetite at the moment! Great snippet, loved the details...

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  4. I can imagine the turmoil roiling inside her, as she prepares to do exactly what Yue told her not to do. Good snippet.

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  5. A nice dose of hope--that she would be able to eat later.

    Believable descriptions!

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