Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
Pre-Plot:
Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her
sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the
fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really
sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy
who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is
about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and
immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a
demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....
Plot:
Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The
purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite.
Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by
demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a
witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love
back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without
preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn
wrong...
Let's start right where we left off last week!
Dark around the eyes,
deep purple lips, messy hair, dressed all in black. Looking at
herself in the mirror, she could have thought that she was someone
else. Would that be enough for the demons not recognizing her as a
human? With the fish’s smell, she stood a chance.
Dark around the eyes,
deep purple lips, messy hair, dressed all in black. Looking at
herself in the mirror, she could have thought that she was someone
else. Would that be enough for the demons not recognizing her as a
human? With the fish’s smell, she stood a chance.
She went down to the
kitchen, got some bread out of the cupboard and some jam for
breakfast and made herself a cup of tea. While pressing the blade of
the knife on the bread she paused and sighed; there was no need. Her
stomach wouldn’t let her eat anything, she wasn’t in the mood for
any food. She left the knife on the table; someone less stressed out
would use it later.
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Very convincing portrayal of her nervousness.
ReplyDeleteThe details of her looks and smell and aversion to food combine to make this snippet even more compelling than usual.
ReplyDeleteVery believable that she wouldn't have any appetite at the moment! Great snippet, loved the details...
ReplyDeleteI can imagine the turmoil roiling inside her, as she prepares to do exactly what Yue told her not to do. Good snippet.
ReplyDeleteA nice dose of hope--that she would be able to eat later.
ReplyDeleteBelievable descriptions!
What turmoil she's going through.
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