Sunday, November 19, 2017

WeWriWar 231: Demon Soul


Welcome to a new excerpt for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
When Demon Soul first came out, it wasn't really in it's best form. 
It is the first book of my Demon Series and the First book of The House at The Crossing cluster. I have written a lot of the other books in the series, I have about 6 so far, but I haven't gone to publishing them mostly because I wasn't happy with the quality of Demon Soul and Demon and Fairy. So I wanted to have something that look better and that I could be proud of  before getting the other books out.
I decided to redo Demon Soul with a brand new edit and a brand new cover. 
The book is almost ready and the professional cover should arrive soon so I though I could start here with a few snippet until the cover reveal and the new publishing. 

Enjoy!

Let's start right were we left off last week. 


However, she never managed to have enough powers to bring him back to her. Without his soul, the demon she had loved had died inside his own body. She never saw his soul again, dancing in his eyes. She couldn't bear to see him like that and he didn't love her anymore. He didn't remember their time together, the joy they had once felt. He came to her just by habit. 

So this moment now, was meant to happen. Since that night, she always knew he would leave. She pushed it away as much as she could but now; he was walking away, leaving her with an empty heart.


 

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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 19, 2017 at 12:30 PM

    Pining for a demon, eh? Not everyone can claim to have done that.

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  2. Veronica ScottNovember 20, 2017 at 1:31 AM

    OOH, SAD. But you do make the reader feel the emotion all right - well done!

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  3. Kimberly GouldNovember 20, 2017 at 1:47 AM

    Good luck, you can do it!

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  4. Nancy GideonNovember 20, 2017 at 8:47 AM

    How painful and sad for her, recognizing the end of what she'd been holding onto.

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  5. Hywela LynNovember 21, 2017 at 9:53 AM

    A sad and emotional snippet, I feel so sorry for her, although I can't imagine myself pining for a demon - but you bring out the emotion very clearly and make it easy to sympathise with her.

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