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Let's continue with "The House at the Crossing" and it's a prequel to Demon Soul and the demon series. It's a bit of a mix of Fantasy and Science-fiction.
It follows one of the books more obscure character as she first comes into the House. It's supposed to explain why there are so many people is the house and sort of where they come from and at the same time be a first time adventure for the main character as she needs to adapt to her new role and the new version of who she is.
Let's start right at where we left off last time, let's meet Wendy.
“Come join us to the kitchen, these two need a bottle.”
Hiroshi is crying again. I take a crying Ryan from Aunt Teresa and I'm feeling a bit ashamed of myself for reacting this way to Wendy but I don't know her and I don't know what she is either.
“People in this house, no matter who they are don't hurt each other,” Teresa says as if she can read my mind.
I glance at Wendy who is following us. I can't pinpoint what I actually feel which is pretty rare for me. I would think that with all the different version of me inside me I would at least have a clue but no, we are all in sink, as if I am one and somehow, I wish I wasn't, then maybe I would have a clue.
My other self is still in the kitchen. I wonder when we are going to disappear, I mean from her point of you, I will be the one gone.
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Being in this house is starting to twist her mind into knots. Or at least that's how I'd feel in her shoes.
ReplyDeleteThis is a confusing story--both for the character and the reader. I'm sure if it's read straight through (instead of 10 sentences at a time) it would make more sense.
ReplyDeleteThis is so twisty and WILD. I don't know how you keep it all straight LOL. Enjoyed the snippet!
ReplyDeleteReminds me of Austin Powers, "We don't gnaw on our kitty." Except substitute baby for kitty. :)
ReplyDeleteVery confusing house!
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