Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
Sorry Guys, I have been away on Sundays again. Hopefully I'll be back for a while this time.
Pre-Plot:
Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her
sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the
fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really
sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy
who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is
about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and
immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a
demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....
Plot:
Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The
purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite.
Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by
demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a
witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love
back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without
preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn
wrong...
Brownie ran barefoot in a
cave's dark corridor wearing only her pyjamas. Her skin quivered from
the cold. The floor was wet under her feet. She had to escape
something frightening. She arrived in a bigger room lit by candles
and her eyes took a bit of time to adapt to the sudden brightness.
The walls were covered with shelves which stored ghostly lights
twinkling weakly: Souls.
She tried to find one.
She needed only one of them as much as she pitied the others.
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Oh, that last sentence got me! I wish she could free them all. I like the way you describe the captive souls, though. Nice writing!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Teresa -- that last sentence brings the passage to life. Is it going to suffice, though, to snatch a soul at random?
ReplyDeleteGreat use of ther senses to put us right into the scene! Enjoyed the excerpt...
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