Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
Pre-Plot:
Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her
sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the
fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really
sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy
who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is
about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and
immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a
demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....
Plot:
Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The
purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite.
Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by
demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a
witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love
back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without
preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn
wrong...
"Yobi, Yobi, can you
come here?” She called.
A red-haired little boy,
smiling evilly, with fox ears on the top of his head and nine tails
moving happily on his back walked out of the living room.
Yobi was also very
special. He had been rescued from a farm where he was held prisoner
after trying to hunt chickens. He was a four hundred years old
nine-tailed fox but for a fox being four hundred years old was a very
young age. The farmers had no idea what to do with him because
sometimes he looked like a fox, sometimes like a little boy. He had
been driving them crazy for months when he was brought here. Now, his
most delightful activity was to pull pranks on everybody with his
magical powers.
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A nine tailed fox must be quite a sight! Great bit of imaginative description!
ReplyDeleteOMG, he sounds like a good boy and a sneak. You had me at nine-tailed fox!
ReplyDeleteI love your creativity inventing characters, Linda! It reminds me of the coyote in Native American lore. Nice!
ReplyDeleteSounds like a fabulous character. So playful and probably great at getting into mischief. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteI love Yobi already.
ReplyDeleteI don't know what to do with somebody like that.
ReplyDeleteA kitsune! And only four hundred years old? he's just a baby!
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery of Yobi. I like the character.
ReplyDeleteHa! She has an alterior motive for keeping him there. Great snippet
ReplyDeleteA nine-tailed fox? Yikes! Wouldn't want to meet up with him.
ReplyDeleteI like yobi :-)
ReplyDeleteSounds like quite the handful! Fun snippet.
ReplyDeleteHow adorable. Great snippet. :)
ReplyDeleteAww, cute from a distance. Probably less cute when you have to deal with the pranks!
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