Sunday, October 30, 2016

WeWriWar 179: Rainbow catcher



Welcome to a new excerpt of Rainbow Catcher for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday

Now let's go back to our story.

Summary of previous episodes: Clarissa is coughing and wanted to watch Everett Cooper on TV but Jason refused, she is due to get her rainbow the next day but she seems scared, to make her feel better Jason leave the TV on. Clarissa tried to explain about rainbows, she is a big fan of Everett Cooper but Jason is not too sure about it. Clarissa complained about her dialophone but Jason needs to go to work. Before completely leaving he is thinking about getting her her rainbow. We flashed back to the meeting Jason had with a rainbow seller at the black market. Jason left Clarissa's room to go to work. Jason was talking to his boss about the rainbow coming the next day. Jason prepared the money for the rainbow in a sport bag and went to the hospital. The rainbow seller arrived for the delivery. But it was a scam and Jason prepares to go get the rainbow himself in the desert. Markus has a last surprise for him.
We start just where we left off last week.

 
He had made her won few places on the list because of the emergency of the situation but there was nothing much he could do. Everybody on the list was waiting for a rainbow and it was first come first served, at least in theory. If she was getting weaker, even with the rainbow, it wasn’t sure that she would survive the surgery. Doctor Marshall had explained to Jason many times, without the surgery she was going to die for sure, and with it she could die too and the more they waited the more the rate of success decreased. Jason had read the book about the surgery many times. They would open her chest to work on her heart, that sounded really painful to be open so deeply but she would be sleeping. Then they would open the ventricular and place pieces of rainbow on the broken blood vessels so that the blood would start flowing to the lungs properly again. The longer they waited the more vessels would have to be treated making the surgery last longer. The doctors had to be very careful because the heart would still be beating at the same time they had to make sure that the beating would be regular, even though it would change with each vessel reparation.

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2 comments:

  1. Sounds difficult. I still wonder what the rainbows really are.

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  2. I've been wondering how they used the rainbows.

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