Sunday, September 4, 2016

WeWriWar 171: Rainbow Catcher

Welcome to a new excerpt of Rainbow Catcher for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. 


Now let's go back to our story.

Summary of previous episodes: Clarissa is coughing and wanted to watch Everett Cooper on TV but Jason refused, she is due to get her rainbow the next day but she seems scared, to make her feel better Jason leave the TV on. Clarissa tried to explain about rainbows, she is a big fan of Everett Cooper but Jason is not too sure about it. Clarissa complained about her dialophone but Jason needs to go to work. Before completely leaving he is thinking about getting her her rainbow. We flashed back to the meeting Jason had with a rainbow seller at the black market. Jason left Clarissa's room to go to work. Jason was talking to his boss about the rainbow coming the next day. Jason prepared the money for the rainbow in a sport bag and went to the hospital. The rainbow seller arrived for the delivery. But it was a scam and Jason prepares to go get the rainbow himself in the desert. Markus has a last surprise for him.

We start just where we left off last week.

Gena had approach them, still a nasty look on her face. Markus took the moon catcher back and the spikes went back in. He placed the crystal between the corner inside the croissant, nothing seemed to be willing to happen, the crystal seemed a bit small to fit in properly. Markus pressed on the corner pulling them down toward the crystal and the crystal lit up as the spike went out. The crystal seemed to be levitating and rotating inside the moon catcher. Jason couldn’t believe his eyes, he had never seen such a thing on any bike before and he had been cleaning pieces for two years.
“You place it back here,” Markus said pushing the moon catcher inside the engine. As he left it there, the light disappeared with the spikes.

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12 comments:

  1. PTSeptember 5, 2016 at 2:48 AM

    Interesting piece of equipment! I love that he's not paying attention to Gena, but going on with his demonstration and explanation as if she wasn't there.

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    1. LindaSeptember 8, 2016 at 2:22 PM

      Well they've got history. ;) I think that's an healthy thing to do though, keep your own idea and not let anyone persuade you otherwise.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2016 at 8:27 AM

    You've shown the bike as an old piece of junk, but now I have great faith in its ability to do ... something. I can't say I know what.

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    1. LindaSeptember 8, 2016 at 2:23 PM

      That's me toying with the reader as usual, nothing is ever what it seems to be.

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  3. Iris BSeptember 5, 2016 at 3:35 PM

    Another interesting snippet with more info about the little crystal.

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    1. LindaSeptember 8, 2016 at 2:24 PM

      I think at this point, Jason really needs some luck.

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  4. The Belle in BlueSeptember 6, 2016 at 2:39 AM

    Oh, that's cool! I can't wait to see what this bike can do when he leaves with it.

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

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    1. LindaSeptember 8, 2016 at 2:25 PM

      I can promise you that's going to be spectacular.

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  5. Daelyn MorganaSeptember 6, 2016 at 5:50 AM

    This is a really sweet contraption. You have a cool imagination for gadgets.

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    1. LindaSeptember 8, 2016 at 2:26 PM

      You should see me transform a watch into a time machine. ;)

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  6. Chelle CorderoSeptember 8, 2016 at 11:12 AM

    Wonder what kind of special power the bike will have with that crystal in it

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