Sunday, April 3, 2016

WeWriWar 149: Rainbow Catcher


Welcome to a new excerpt of Rainbow Catcher for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. 

Now let's go back to our story.

Summary of previous episodes: Clarissa is coughing and wanted to watch Everett Cooper on TV but Jason refused, she is due to get her rainbow the next day but she seems scared, to make her feel better Jason leave the TV on. Clarissa tried to explain about rainbows, she is a big fan of Everett Cooper but Jason is not too sure about it. Clarissa complained about her dialophone but Jason needs to go to work. Before completely leaving he is thinking about getting her her rainbow. We flashed back to the meeting Jason had with a rainbow seller at the black market. Jason left Clarissa's room to go to work. Jason was talking to his boss about the rainbow coming the next day. Jason prepared the money for the rainbow in a sport bag and went to the hospital. The rainbow seller arrived for the delivery.

We start just where we left off last week.

“You’re kidding!”
“Mum said that the only way to make miracles happen is to believe in them, so I really tried,” Clarissa said.
Jason hugged her. All this time, he had no idea that his little sister had been so grown up.
“I’ll bring you a rainbow,” he said feeling strangely relieved.
“It’s not realistic either, you didn’t even repair the dialophone,” she said hugging him back.
“It’s because I know you will sleep with it again,” Jason said defensively.

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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 3, 2016 at 5:04 PM

    So believing in miracles has helped her get a rainbow? I feel like I missed something here, but I'm hoping that after all this she manages to get what she needs.

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  2. T. M. HunterApril 3, 2016 at 9:07 PM

    Of course that's the only way to have them happen! Interesting snippet. Love a good back-and-forth dialogue...

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  3. Charmaine GordonApril 3, 2016 at 11:31 PM

    I'm with Ed. I feel like I missed something.

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  4. Veronica ScottApril 3, 2016 at 11:43 PM

    Nice little moment, great snippet. I definitely want that purple rainbow too.

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  5. The Belle in BlueApril 4, 2016 at 1:04 AM

    Yes, that's the nature of miracles! I like his insight into his sister and really, really hope he gets her rainbow for her.

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

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  6. PTApril 4, 2016 at 2:19 AM

    Love the comment about the dialophone. LOL

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  7. UnknownApril 4, 2016 at 2:44 AM

    Neat setting details. I want to know more about rainbows, and what they do in this world.

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  8. Karen Michelle NuttApril 4, 2016 at 11:31 PM

    I do hope he will be about to get her that rainbow. I guess believing it will happen, is almost like praying and having faith. Interesting story.

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  9. Daelyn MorganaApril 5, 2016 at 7:04 AM

    Well that's one way to put stock in miracles.

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  10. UnknownApril 9, 2016 at 10:24 PM

    I've just jumped in recently so kind of playing catch up but after reading the past few weeks, I really want her to get that rainbow!! I have no idea where she'll put it or what she'll do with it, but it just seems kind of magical :-)

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  11. Chelle CorderoApril 10, 2016 at 1:03 PM

    Believing in miracles, beautiful notion.
    I think if she can count on anyone, it will be her brother.

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  12. UnknownApril 11, 2016 at 6:55 AM

    Great snippet. I love the relationship these two have.

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