Sunday, March 15, 2015

WeWriWar 94 Demon and Fairy

Welcome to a new excerpt of Demon and Fairy for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.


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In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to “It is the first time the Chaos manifested,” Seti’s father answered clenching his fists. “Then it is bad luck, he shouldn’t have been born in the first place, and he shouldn’t have stayed alive once born. Now, you can start blaming yourself for everything that is going to happen if he lets you live long enough to see it. We can’t be sure.” The man said without even looking back. He followed his companion through the corridor to the kitchen door. her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. We had some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. Seti managed to open a hole in the wall while keeping the Chaos away, but how long can he stay in control? 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Seti had stopped to wait and see what the others would do.

He was wondering if he wasn’t just wasting his advance on them and decided to continue further. He flew again in direction of the beach. The Chaos wanted to go back and fight, each time his wings were flapping further away from his enemies, each time the Chaos seemed to be pushing needles into his brain. He stopped again in bushes making the Chaos calm down a little. He took advantage of it to take some deep breaths, and massaged his neck and temples. He had never stayed with the Chaos for so long. His strength was leaving him and he was hungry.
“They are not coming, those monsters they are scared and hiding, I am too powerful,” the Chaos yelled with pride.

Answers to last week's comments 

The chaos always seems like it's going to get it total control any minute, right? I guess it will be a never ending battle to the end!


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14 comments:

  1. Iris BMarch 15, 2015 at 10:04 AM

    The conflict is very well written. Another great snippet!

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  2. Elaine CantrellMarch 15, 2015 at 12:52 PM

    Needles in the brain. Shiver.

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  3. P.T.WyantMarch 15, 2015 at 1:17 PM

    I love the way he's fighting with the Chaos (and in a way, fighting with himself).

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  4. P.T.WyantMarch 15, 2015 at 1:17 PM

    I love the way he's fighting with the Chaos (and in a way, fighting with himself).

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  5. Chelle CorderoMarch 15, 2015 at 3:06 PM

    It sounds like the Chaos is fully in control, especially with Seti feeling weaker. What a battle he's been through.

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  6. Anastasia VitskyMarch 15, 2015 at 4:49 PM

    It's a great idea to post answers to comments in this week's snippet. I may have to try that. :)

    I'm curious about this world you are setting up!

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  7. Charmaine GordonMarch 15, 2015 at 11:42 PM

    I'm with Elaine. Needles in the brain? I'm outa there but not dear Seti. What a world you've created, Linda.

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  8. Teresa CypherMarch 15, 2015 at 11:58 PM

    Oy! What a snippet, Linda. I'm worried for Seti. Nicely done!

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  9. CeciliaMarch 16, 2015 at 2:22 AM

    Love how you portray the constant fighting he battles with chaos back and forth.

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  10. Karen Michelle NuttMarch 16, 2015 at 4:23 AM

    Poor Seti-- such conflicted emotions raging through him. It's no wonder is head is hurting. Well done!

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  11. UnknownMarch 16, 2015 at 5:18 AM

    “They are not coming, those monsters they are scared and hiding, I am too powerful,” the Chaos yelled with pride.--- I laughed at how excited and confident Chaos is. :)

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  12. Veronica ScottMarch 16, 2015 at 5:24 AM

    Poor Seti never catches a break from battling with Chaos, does he? I liked his internal dialogue....

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  13. diannehartsockMarch 16, 2015 at 9:30 AM

    Oh yikes! I'm afraid of what will happen if Chaos gains control of him. Such an interesting storyline. :)

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  14. JTsuruokaMarch 16, 2015 at 12:01 PM

    Hmmm. Pride comes before a fall, as they say. It's very interesting how things are unfolding with the Chaos as a part of him.

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