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But first, here is a little part of Demon World unedited, I won NaNoWriMo already, but I'm not finished with the draft of Fairy World, so I joined NaNoFiMo. I don't know how regularly I'll be writing for it though. The goal is to finish Fairy World's draft.
Today meet Seti and Azazel. Enjoy!
“I
have never met such an idiot in my entire life!” Azazel explained,
yelling with the loudest voice he could just near Seti’s ear.
Seti jumped aside, holding his ears. Demon’s ears were ultra sensitive
and raising the decibels could be very painful.
“Shut
the hell up,” he yelled back at Azazel.
They
seemed to hate each other and couldn’t stop fighting at least
verbally as soon as they were in the same room.
“But
seriously, why the hell did you go back home, again, I mean it’s
not like you don’t have like two very safe places to stay at,”
Azazel answered again.
“It’s
not like I can’t fix things forever,” Seti answered.
“It’s
not like your family ever cared,” Azazel said.
“It’s
not like you ever had one,” Seti answered.
That was too much and he
knew it, but he couldn’t help himself, the more he was hurting
Azazel, the better he felt.
“It’s
not like yours ever tried to kill you, at least mine didn’t,”
Azazel answered.
“Whatever!”
Seti said, giving up the debate.
The
fact was, Azazel was right, even if it would have killed him to admit
it.
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Interesting interplay. Either these two hate each other, or they're fighting attraction. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI have a feeling that they have great feelings for each other and are trying to hide the fact by arguing :D
ReplyDeleteToya