Sunday, November 23, 2014

WeWriWar 78 Demon and Fairy

Hello Everyone!

Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. I'm almost done with NaNoWriMo, only about 3500 words left to write. I'll be uploading the next part of the draft soon tonight or tomorrow so you can go have a look if you are interested (Warming: it's start pretty chaotic if you haven't read Blue Angel which draft is also uploaded).
 


In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. Now we are having some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. 
  

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week. Now that the Chaos has calmed down, Seti is looking for the way out.
 

“I could have done it ages ago if the Chaos hadn’t been messing around with my head. I wouldn’t even be locked up if it hadn’t decided to be a pain just at the wrong moment,” Seti thought and sighed.
He moved the flame around him carefully. The darkness seemed to be absorbing his fire. He made it bigger and stood up to go grab the guitar with his free hand. He shook it a bit.
“Yes,” he said happily.
He shook a bit more and a candle went out through the hole.



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11 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 23, 2014 at 12:34 PM

    Your world is colorful, both by description and as we can see with your vivid accompanying picture. I enjoy tales with a fantastic element to them. Glad I discovered yours!
    http://amodernvampire.blogspot.com/2014/11/weekend-writing-warrior-excerpt-1-pa.html

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  2. UnknownNovember 23, 2014 at 5:06 PM

    I hope Seti gets out. He shouldn't be locked up.

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  3. Iris BNovember 23, 2014 at 6:03 PM

    Another great snippet today, Linda.

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  4. UnknownNovember 24, 2014 at 12:28 AM

    nice, is he going to play the guitar?

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  5. Karen Michelle NuttNovember 24, 2014 at 1:43 AM

    Interesting scene. (Tweeted)

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  6. UnknownNovember 24, 2014 at 6:08 AM

    Great Snippet. :)

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  7. JTsuruokaNovember 24, 2014 at 9:04 AM

    There's a real note of mysteriousness in this week's snippet. Plus, I love candles...

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  8. Veronica ScottNovember 24, 2014 at 9:43 AM

    Well, we all know by now that I like Seti, and the fact that he plays the guitar is just another added plus! Great snippet...

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  9. CeciliaNovember 24, 2014 at 3:57 PM

    Great snippet this week.

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  10. Charmaine GordonNovember 26, 2014 at 7:23 AM

    Your imagination dazzles the mind, Linda. Happy Thanksgiving and let's hear Seti strum away all his Chaos.

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  11. UnknownNovember 26, 2014 at 7:22 PM

    Awesome 8! Seti pulls at my heartstrings...

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