I decided to join a group of writers posting a hook of their work on Wednesday and here is my first participation. Find the other writers here.
I'm posting a little part of Demon Soul. Enjoy!
"She sighed deeply and dried her tears; he was just an empty shell.
She had read so much lately, her way of thinking had changed. But even if he
was just an empty shell, his soul was still here somewhere in this world or another
and wherever it was she was going to find it. Her new knowledge tortured her;
she was imagining his soul in the worse possible places. She
had been having nightmares for weeks, she had been dreaming with opened eyes
barely noticing the world around her and she had been waking up at night
covered in cold sweat. She needed to find it back and to protect it, no matter
what it took. Nobody would care for a demon's soul; nobody would ever care but
her. She saw it and now it was her responsibility."
Some nice emotion in this. I am really intrigued. Welcome to HDH x
ReplyDeleteA very emotional hook! Congrats on your first HDH! :)
ReplyDeleteShe seems so sad, I hope she finds happiness. Great hook
ReplyDeleteEmotional hook. Nicely done. Welcome to HDH
ReplyDeleteWelcome to HDH!
ReplyDeleteA lovely first hook, full of emotion and heartbreak.
Welcome you will love it here! Great hook!! I adore Demons!
ReplyDeleteThat's very touching how much she cares for him. I'm glad you joined our group - welcome :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the HDH group! Nice hook!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the HDH Group!
ReplyDeleteNice hook with a lot of emotion!
Welcome to HDH. Great snippet, well done!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to HDH! Great snippet here ... lots of emotion!
ReplyDeleteCongrats on your first HDH! You're suggesting an interesting world here. Keep it up.
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