tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post2060230577174578374..comments2023-11-20T10:33:19.944+09:00Comments on Mes crazy expériences: WeWriWar 63 Demon and Fairy Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-40584653899074839932014-08-17T02:59:47.411+09:002014-08-17T02:59:47.411+09:00I can't wait to read more of this and find out...I can't wait to read more of this and find out what's happening to him and why. P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-78846034415340741782014-08-14T13:15:54.472+09:002014-08-14T13:15:54.472+09:00I could feel the panic! Well done!I could feel the panic! Well done!Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-18855089235079617612014-08-13T03:11:27.162+09:002014-08-13T03:11:27.162+09:00It sounds as if poor Seti is caught in the middle ...It sounds as if poor Seti is caught in the middle of a ba-a-a-ad dream, or some delirious state. I really feel for him.<br />By the way, I would make a change in one of your lines to read "until they started hurting" (add 'ed' to start)<br />Good 8.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-80216848989461740112014-08-12T04:21:57.041+09:002014-08-12T04:21:57.041+09:00I was wondering if he was blind from the previous ...I was wondering if he was blind from the previous snippet. But that doesn't explain the missing door handle. Something is very wrong!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-61217546291930484552014-08-11T12:32:56.594+09:002014-08-11T12:32:56.594+09:00Poor Seti, I hope he's okay!Poor Seti, I hope he's okay!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-80355672117269493412014-08-11T12:19:30.650+09:002014-08-11T12:19:30.650+09:00Poor Seti, seems like a pretty scary situation.Poor Seti, seems like a pretty scary situation.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-54314496234458390502014-08-11T11:20:56.223+09:002014-08-11T11:20:56.223+09:00This is good. You really capture the feel of chaos...This is good. You really capture the feel of chaos and confusion. JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-65705224337160563932014-08-11T07:39:07.389+09:002014-08-11T07:39:07.389+09:00Oh dear, ok now I'm all worried about Seti! An...Oh dear, ok now I'm all worried about Seti! And the darkness and the missing door handle and...the CHAOS! Excellent excerpt....Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-34148623490361780512014-08-11T06:09:09.884+09:002014-08-11T06:09:09.884+09:00This still sounds like a hard place to be.This still sounds like a hard place to be.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-71104255026463927302014-08-11T02:22:14.351+09:002014-08-11T02:22:14.351+09:00Some sort of kill or cure strategy?Some sort of kill or cure strategy?Sue Ann Bowlinghttp://homecomingbook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-21033087001232399752014-08-10T22:11:37.412+09:002014-08-10T22:11:37.412+09:00Interesting scene with lots of potential. I'd ...Interesting scene with lots of potential. I'd like to read it written from Seti's POV rather than being told about it by the narrator, especially the part in which he discovers he can't see.<br />Nice 8!FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-6518321226183971512014-08-10T21:45:05.064+09:002014-08-10T21:45:05.064+09:00I could sense the panic coming on. Nice job of sho...I could sense the panic coming on. Nice job of showing is that, Linda. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-75212126782745853132014-08-10T13:44:22.747+09:002014-08-10T13:44:22.747+09:00Yep, he's in deep. Poor Seti!Yep, he's in deep. Poor Seti!Carol Burnside aka Annie Rayburnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12293010041077113759noreply@blogger.com