Sunday, June 9, 2019

WeWriWar 284: Demon Soul


Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday
 
Pre-Plot:
Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....

Plot:
Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite. Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn wrong...

Let's start right where we left off last week! 


“There is nothing you can do with those two together,” the witch said.
“Nothing you know of,” Brownie answered finding strength she wouldn’t have ever thought herself capable of. She paid for the items, buried them into the only pocket of her coat free from fish pieces, and went out of the shop as fast as she could without running. 

Brownie looked up at the end of the path, she was almost there. She walked carefully not to collide with drunken demons coming out bars, finding the distance towards the end of the street terribly long. She reached it without problem and ran through the city centre without looking back.

She stopped, out of breath half way, before she reached her house, still clenching her fist around the aquamarine stone in her pocket.

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3 comments:

  1. Brownie is a lovely character, very devoted. You have created a unique Universe here!

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  2. I like her determination here. It really comes through on the page - great snippet!

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  3. Nice sense of danger with the drunk demons. Sounds like a scary place for a young girl.

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