tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post8068449560615335091..comments2023-11-20T10:33:19.944+09:00Comments on Mes crazy expériences: WeWriWar 85 Demon and FairyLindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-37426082018314934072015-01-19T13:05:26.598+09:002015-01-19T13:05:26.598+09:00Yay for Seti! I'm glad he can resist the Chaos...Yay for Seti! I'm glad he can resist the Chaos and still think for himself.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-8362620323600021222015-01-17T21:11:52.134+09:002015-01-17T21:11:52.134+09:00I feel for him, great emotion and snippet!I feel for him, great emotion and snippet!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13837948914402096224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-10055686145077306092015-01-12T20:44:35.961+09:002015-01-12T20:44:35.961+09:00Nicely done on the emotions ... well done.Nicely done on the emotions ... well done.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-35346705409178141922015-01-12T13:26:23.864+09:002015-01-12T13:26:23.864+09:00Great snippet, always pull in me in.Great snippet, always pull in me in.Ceciliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07076648307785084672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-27000941686130976862015-01-12T12:44:44.911+09:002015-01-12T12:44:44.911+09:00I am such a Seti fan, love that he's determine...I am such a Seti fan, love that he's determined to control the Chaos so he doesn't hurt the people he does care for.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-49046158153853976312015-01-12T11:55:37.797+09:002015-01-12T11:55:37.797+09:00I feel bad for him.I feel bad for him.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-16402062341816059082015-01-12T10:13:51.024+09:002015-01-12T10:13:51.024+09:00Seti is getting stronger. I'm glad he doesn...Seti is getting stronger. I'm glad he doesn't want to hurt anyone and is aware that he could. Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-37368544300799991512015-01-12T05:52:07.056+09:002015-01-12T05:52:07.056+09:00Agreed with Frank. Having the narrator give us thi...Agreed with Frank. Having the narrator give us this information keeps me detached somehow. I think I'd connect better to Seti and his struggle if I had his thoughts directly from him here.Kate Warrenhttp://www.thekatewarren.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-46867548437410077512015-01-12T03:47:33.218+09:002015-01-12T03:47:33.218+09:00Chip has a good idea. I'd love to read it in S...Chip has a good idea. I'd love to read it in Seti's own words. This is a strong scene.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-26211154814941006092015-01-11T16:23:34.766+09:002015-01-11T16:23:34.766+09:00I love his internal war between wanting to hurt pe...I love his internal war between wanting to hurt people and not wanting to at the same time.P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-85466264330194274802015-01-11T10:22:24.490+09:002015-01-11T10:22:24.490+09:00Nice 8.
This passage would be stronger if, after t...Nice 8.<br />This passage would be stronger if, after the first two sentences, the reader heard everything else from Seti--rather then the narrator. He could be thinking out loud or to himself.FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.com