tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post439295876066482985..comments2023-11-20T10:33:19.944+09:00Comments on Mes crazy expériences: WeWriWar 269: Demon Soul Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-29867603651261588992019-02-11T10:11:11.070+09:002019-02-11T10:11:11.070+09:00Great use of ther senses to put us right into the ...Great use of ther senses to put us right into the scene! Enjoyed the excerpt...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-7016840675089085902019-02-11T05:39:45.106+09:002019-02-11T05:39:45.106+09:00I agree with Teresa -- that last sentence brings t...I agree with Teresa -- that last sentence brings the passage to life. Is it going to suffice, though, to snatch a soul at random?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-8561881991668119032019-02-10T15:54:27.629+09:002019-02-10T15:54:27.629+09:00Oh, that last sentence got me! I wish she could fr...Oh, that last sentence got me! I wish she could free them all. I like the way you describe the captive souls, though. Nice writing!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com