tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post4272421648505693871..comments2023-11-20T10:33:19.944+09:00Comments on Mes crazy expériences: Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 15Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-24335643831084404892013-09-04T22:24:19.206+09:002013-09-04T22:24:19.206+09:00Love the banter between them! And green hair...nic...Love the banter between them! And green hair...nice! Want to know more. Enjoyed your 8!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08920349957061612653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-34702247168028815912013-09-04T02:57:25.719+09:002013-09-04T02:57:25.719+09:00Seti's personality really shines, as brightly ...Seti's personality really shines, as brightly as her hair now does... You've done a great job using dialogue to show what each character is really like.<br /><br />What a unique world you are creating ... very nice snippet - thanks!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04938062549077834365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-70361919483023476332013-09-02T12:16:26.099+09:002013-09-02T12:16:26.099+09:00Did that turn her hair green? I like that she does...Did that turn her hair green? I like that she doesn't take any crap from him though. Despite his blowups, shes not afraid to tell him how it is. Good 8.HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-38865133769097528092013-09-02T11:12:42.375+09:002013-09-02T11:12:42.375+09:00Linda, so much fun going on in your eight this wee...Linda, so much fun going on in your eight this week! Made me smile!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-16653108910005793822013-09-02T10:12:31.187+09:002013-09-02T10:12:31.187+09:00Wow, lots of snark happening there...
At least th...Wow, lots of snark happening there...<br /><br />At least the snake's okay, right? Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-32822906117432225872013-09-02T02:49:18.150+09:002013-09-02T02:49:18.150+09:00Nice snippet. In first sentence, did you mean &quo...Nice snippet. In first sentence, did you mean "Oops"? Cheryl Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02904294724475864288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-85608248228192646172013-09-02T02:29:05.105+09:002013-09-02T02:29:05.105+09:00Always a new development! Enjoyed their dialog...c...Always a new development! Enjoyed their dialog...couldn't comment the last two weeks, had browser problems on my end, but I enjoyed Seti saving the snake.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-14383301592649824912013-09-02T01:48:07.509+09:002013-09-02T01:48:07.509+09:00“Your hair is… green” LOL I love this line!“Your hair is… green” LOL I love this line!PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-39467516428361226522013-09-02T01:47:33.009+09:002013-09-02T01:47:33.009+09:00“Your hair is… green” LOL I love this line!“Your hair is… green” LOL I love this line!PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-51273431176911205332013-09-01T23:31:57.245+09:002013-09-01T23:31:57.245+09:00Enjoyed the snippet. Nice banter. So green hair......Enjoyed the snippet. Nice banter. So green hair...hmmm... <br /><br />Note: in this sentence...<br />"..who felt loudly on the ground."<br /><br />Did you mean "fell"?<br />Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-52840589000719861662013-09-01T22:18:12.985+09:002013-09-01T22:18:12.985+09:00You got that YA dialog down very well.
Nice snippe...You got that YA dialog down very well.<br />Nice snippett.FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.com