tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post4154023457097669405..comments2023-11-20T10:33:19.944+09:00Comments on Mes crazy expériences: WeWriWar 132: Rainbow Catcher Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-46367589357608870942015-12-07T18:40:51.302+09:002015-12-07T18:40:51.302+09:00I'd be scared, too. Let's hope the deal go...I'd be scared, too. Let's hope the deal goes smoothly ....Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-58928149860951750652015-12-07T15:11:02.012+09:002015-12-07T15:11:02.012+09:00Great snippet.Great snippet.Ceciliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07076648307785084672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-3764795226356985492015-12-07T14:28:22.390+09:002015-12-07T14:28:22.390+09:00So, the rainbow arrives, eh? It's about time.
...So, the rainbow arrives, eh? It's about time.<br /><br />I noticed a few typos -- hope you don't mind me pointing them out. "He didn’t take a few steps that" ... ends without really ending. And "He was as sweating as when" needs a bit of work.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-12266920759496409382015-12-07T09:14:25.345+09:002015-12-07T09:14:25.345+09:00Things are coming to a head here, I think. (Does C...Things are coming to a head here, I think. (Does Clarissa know that he's been saving to buy her a rainbow?) I can't wait for next week. Loved her reaction to the man.PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-64055032279458271092015-12-07T05:45:39.587+09:002015-12-07T05:45:39.587+09:00Ooh, the way you describe him, the person does see...Ooh, the way you describe him, the person does seem scary and unpleasant, as well as untrustworthy! I hate to think of him handling rainbows! Great snippet...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-25837631276044024102015-12-07T00:37:32.418+09:002015-12-07T00:37:32.418+09:00I'd hide too! Great job making him sound scary...I'd hide too! Great job making him sound scary. Looking forward to next week!<br /><br />~Joyce ScarbroughThe Belle in Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16368021976814668783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-11352177306523368952015-12-06T17:21:48.408+09:002015-12-06T17:21:48.408+09:00Great descriptions. Makes me wonder if he can be t...Great descriptions. Makes me wonder if he can be trusted. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.com