tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post369957215842879184..comments2023-11-20T10:33:19.944+09:00Comments on Mes crazy expériences: WeWriWar 108: Rainbow Catcher Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-73336450716794796002015-06-25T04:56:50.482+09:002015-06-25T04:56:50.482+09:00So curious what the doctor told Jason about Claris...So curious what the doctor told Jason about Clarissa. I wonder WHO the dialophone is connecting her with (this world?). Great job with showing Jason's desperation.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-48072609178692746952015-06-23T03:18:48.990+09:002015-06-23T03:18:48.990+09:00Clarissa must be using the dialophone for somethin...Clarissa must be using the dialophone for something. But what... And so brutal for Jason. He's in a painful place. If anything, I think he's suffering more than Clarissa.Eden "Kymele" Mabeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01550337993392791643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-43541623432739833782015-06-22T09:54:00.380+09:002015-06-22T09:54:00.380+09:00Oh, dear, that's a huge worry for him. Poor gu...Oh, dear, that's a huge worry for him. Poor guy.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-70107029129312047952015-06-22T06:32:14.858+09:002015-06-22T06:32:14.858+09:00Hmm, and I wonder how much she knows of what Jason...Hmm, and I wonder how much she knows of what Jason's not telling her?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15615944959979986826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-13707308146555148212015-06-22T02:25:26.932+09:002015-06-22T02:25:26.932+09:00Great job on capturing his emotions. And I'm c...Great job on capturing his emotions. And I'm curious to know why she sleeps with the dialophone, too. Waiting for a call about a rainbow, maybe?PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-36587670048777347882015-06-22T01:25:56.532+09:002015-06-22T01:25:56.532+09:00You have me curious. Great snippet, I'm enjoyi...You have me curious. Great snippet, I'm enjoying the story. <br />Good luck with the proposal. :) Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-40562954723357559272015-06-21T14:41:28.528+09:002015-06-21T14:41:28.528+09:00I wonder, too, if she talks to someone else. I thi...I wonder, too, if she talks to someone else. I think you're doing a stellar job of writing his emotions. :-)<br /><br />Good luck on the job hunt and your written proposal!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-64274147209038753372015-06-21T14:01:43.881+09:002015-06-21T14:01:43.881+09:00Okay, that dialophone definitely has a backstory t...Okay, that dialophone definitely has a backstory to it. Just what did the doctor say though that has him so worried?? I'm curious now. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3047453099179396314.post-49413956296698371212015-06-21T09:53:41.035+09:002015-06-21T09:53:41.035+09:00Poor Clarissa. I hope she gets her rainbow soon! A...Poor Clarissa. I hope she gets her rainbow soon! And well done and his emotions ... and re the dialophone ... I wonder whether she talks to someone else ????Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.com