Sunday, September 2, 2018

WeWriWar 260: Demon Soul

Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday

Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....

Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite. Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn wrong...

Let's start right where we left off.  

Only when absolutely necessary, she thought again. Well, this time it was absolutely necessary, even if going there alone wasn’t a rejoicing task.
She put down her pencil and looked at the list. Tomorrow, she would go to the dark street first, then do the rest of the shopping. It was way better to be caught there with nothing in case she was caught. She took the books back to their shelves. Over the last few weeks she had learned so much about demons, but it was the first time she was almost happy about it. At first she felt like she invaded Yue’s world without his consent.

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  1. Great job building up the suspense, and the foreboding. Hope she's not letting herself in for trouble, though.

  2. I'm really enjoying your heroine and her determined approach to saving the hero! Another great snippet...

  3. It sounds like she's contemplating something dangerous.

  4. I love the change in her mood.