Wednesday, August 8, 2018

Wednesday Snippet 182: Blue Angel

Welcome to a new part of Blue Angel unedited, we start right where we left off last time.

They landed in a deserted parking lot. There weren't so many cars in the Demon World but demons liked huge extended spaces. It was easier to fight and easier to land there too. Torsti looked around. The place still seemed asleep, not everybody had to get up with the sun.
“Better get to a motel or something, we need a shower if we don't want to scare everyone away,” Odeon said.
Torsti hid a smile happy to see his brother finally take some interest in his own life.
“Over there, it doesn't look too good but it would have to do,” he said.
The building seemed to be half falling apart, the name of the motel was missing two letters and only one of the remaining was still glowing. The wooden curtains at the windows had been torn apart.
“It's not a good neighborhood, I'm almost glad Lonan is not here to see that,” Odeon said.
Torsti felt like his little brother was probably seeing a lot worse but refrained from making Odeon notice it.
“In the state we are at, I bet nobody is going to want to come too close,” he said swinging his hammer to leave it rest on his left shoulder.
Their clothes were stained in blood from the fights and the walk in the forest didn't help with the dirt stains either. They smelled humid like homeless beggar.
Torsti pushed the door of the motel, a little demon female in out of fashion simple flowery dress was sitting at the counter with her back to the door, looking at a television with doubtful color showing humans. Torsti paused a moment to look at the image box fascinated while the woman turned her head to look at him. She grabbed her wing to make she that it wouldn't fly in the way.
“What do you want?” she said.
“One bedroom with shower and some breakfast,” Odeon answered pushing his brother.

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