Sunday, January 7, 2018

WeWriWar 235: Demon Soul


Welcome to a new excerpt of DEMON SOUL for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

Pre-Plot:
Brownie is a normal girl, or so she thinks. She likes to chat with her sisters about random things, she likes fashion and she is member of the fashion club at school. But one day, as her little brother gets really sick because of a curse placed on him, she meets this really strange guy who cures him absorbing the baby's sickness within himself. As he is about to fall from his new acquired fever, Brownie sees Yue's soul and immediately falls in love with him. But Yue is not a human, Yue is a demon.
Brownie and Yue will built their love story until....

Plot:
Until Yue's soul is stolen. There is nothing left of their love. The purple light dancing in Yue's grey eyes is gone. Forever? Not quite. Brownie is desperate to find it back. And to get a soul stolen by demons, she needs to go deep into dark magic! But Brownie is not a witch, she is just looking for a spell powerful enough to bring her love back. When an amateur starts playing with strong magic without preparation and without caring for the consequences, things turn wrong...

Let's start right where we left off


He looked very proud of himself but for a second the only thing Brownie saw was the beautiful purple light dancing in his grey eyes. As he stroked Ayokunle's back however, the cry of the baby took her away from her dream.
"What do you think you're doing?"
She took Ayokunle away from him and cradled him sighing. It had taken her hours to make him fall asleep and now he was crying and she had to soothe him all over again.
"I can cure him," Yue said again full of confidence.
"Oh, really? He is cursed. There is nothing you can do. Have you ever seen wings grow?" 




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7 comments:

  1. Ah, some nice conflict front and center. I like where this is going. Good snippet.

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  2. Beautiful eyes and promises - teasing!

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  3. She has less confidence in him than he has in himself.

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  4. Good conflict. Makes me want to read more.

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  5. Brownie is going to be seeing a lot of strange things soon enough, it seems. I like how you have demons be more than what is often portrayed in mythology...

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  6. Great scene. Makes me want to know more.
    Love your book cover.

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