Welcome to a new excerpt for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
When Demon Soul first came out, it wasn't really in it's best form.
It is the first book of my Demon Series and the First book of The House
at The Crossing cluster. I have written a lot of the other books in the
series, I have about 6 so far, but I haven't gone to publishing them
mostly because I wasn't happy with the quality of Demon Soul and Demon
and Fairy. So I wanted to have something that look better and that I
could be proud of before getting the other books out.
I decided to redo Demon Soul with a brand new edit and a brand new cover.
The book is almost ready and the professional cover should arrive soon so I though I could start here with a few snippet until the cover
reveal and the new publishing.
Enjoy!
Let's start right were we left off last week.
However, she never
managed to have enough powers to bring him back to her. Without his
soul, the demon she had loved had died inside his own body. She never
saw his soul again, dancing in his eyes. She couldn't bear to see him
like that and he didn't love her anymore. He didn't remember their
time together, the joy they had once felt. He came to her just by
habit.
So this moment now, was meant to happen. Since that night, she always knew he would leave. She pushed it away as much as she could but now; he was walking away, leaving her with an empty heart.
So this moment now, was meant to happen. Since that night, she always knew he would leave. She pushed it away as much as she could but now; he was walking away, leaving her with an empty heart.
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Pining for a demon, eh? Not everyone can claim to have done that.
ReplyDeleteOOH, SAD. But you do make the reader feel the emotion all right - well done!
ReplyDeleteGood luck, you can do it!
ReplyDeleteHow painful and sad for her, recognizing the end of what she'd been holding onto.
ReplyDeleteA sad and emotional snippet, I feel so sorry for her, although I can't imagine myself pining for a demon - but you bring out the emotion very clearly and make it easy to sympathise with her.
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