Sunday, August 20, 2017

WeWriWar 220: Rainbow catcher

Welcome to a new excerpt of Rainbow Catcher for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

Now let's go back to our story.

Summary of previous episodes: Clarissa is coughing and wanted to watch Everett Cooper on TV but Jason refused, she is due to get her rainbow the next day but she seems scared, to make her feel better Jason leave the TV on. Clarissa tried to explain about rainbows, she is a big fan of Everett Cooper but Jason is not too sure about it. Clarissa complained about her dialophone but Jason needs to go to work. Before completely leaving he is thinking about getting her her rainbow. We flashed back to the meeting Jason had with a rainbow seller at the black market. Jason left Clarissa's room to go to work. Jason was talking to his boss about the rainbow coming the next day. Jason prepared the money for the rainbow in a sport bag and went to the hospital. The rainbow seller arrived for the delivery. But it was a scam and Jason prepares to go get the rainbow himself in the desert. Markus has a last surprise for him.

We start just where we left off last week.

He felt that the desert was giving him some impalpable knowledge and he wanted more of it as much as he knew he couldn’t get out anymore before finishing his initiation to this new kind of thoughts.
He reached the first city within few hours. It wasn’t really a city as it was only composed of one street. He parked the bike and turned it off in front of the only shop. As expected the engine was already cold, he opened the box on the side with no effort and removed the moon catcher before sliding it in his left pocket.
He entered the shop before taking away the cloth covering his face. It was a shop, a pub, a restaurant, a post office, everything all at once. An old woman was rocking herself on her chair at the entrance singing for herself a tune which seemed to have been lost in ages.

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1 comment:

  1. Great description of the town and especially of the shop and the old woman.