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Sunday, May 24, 2015

WeWriWar 104: Rainbow Catcher


Welcome to a new excerpt of Rainbow Catcher for the Weekend Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

I'm trying to get Rainbow Catcher ready and if everything goes as planed it should be published at the end of June, so exciting! 

I'm also working on the cover so you might see some changes soon.

Summary of previous episodes: Clarissa is coughing and wanted to watch Everett Cooper on TV but Jason refused, she is due to get her rainbow the next day but she seems scared, to make her feel better Jason leave the TV on.

Now let's go back to business. We start just where we left off last week.

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Jason had found a rainbow for her, finally, half price. He had been working hard days and nights to gather enough money to pay for it. She felt lucky to have such a nice and caring older brother. 

But, even with this unexpected rainbow on her side, it was not guaranteed that the surgery would succeed, rainbow surgeries were complicated. Waves and photons, something about resonances the doctor had explained, but Clarissa had forgotten the complicated words only remembering two, ventricular hypertrophy, that's what the doctor called it when her heart went boum boum boum before going on holidays. 

And only a purple rainbow would make it behave because the doctor said so, oscillation, propagation... Something. If you had asked her, she would have chosen a green rainbow, they were pretty enough and there were tons of them, that's how they made the cough medicine and the people ended up with a green voice while using it.

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13 comments:

  1. Wow, this snippet was one wild ride! Thanks for sharing.

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  2. Lots of information. great snippet.

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  3. Rainbow surgery? Sounds interesting--I like that different colors do different things.

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  4. I love the imagination in your snippet, Linda and am caught up in thinking what a green voice sounds like, I like to think of it as being kind of croaky, like a frog, lol.

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  5. I love this whole rainbow concept and what each color is good for curing!

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  6. Rainbow surgery... And green rainbows giving a green voice... Huh! What cool descriptions!

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  7. Intriguing snippet! Love your fantasy world. Great job!

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  8. The idea of the rainbow is charming.

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  9. Rainbow surgery - hmm. My daughter and I use rainbows are good signs - so rainbow surgery should be successful.

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  10. I like how you seamlessly combine fantasy and the very real world.

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  11. What an awesome concept! I love it.

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  12. I love the way you presented information so easily without it being an info dump.

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  13. Of course rainbow surgeries are complicated!
    This is a fun story you've got going on here. The fantastical and the real world collide in interesting ways.

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