Wednesday, November 12, 2014

Hump Day Hook 36

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But first, here is a little part of Demon World unedited, as I'm now writing book 5 of the series for NaNoWriMo with daily draft upload I thought it might be a good idea to show you tibits of the entire series. It's time for you to meet Yue, he is maybe my character with the most tragic destiny, nothing good really ever happens to Yue... Really.
You’re late again Yue, how many times do I have to tell you that breakfast starts at seven”, a thin older man said putting his hand on his arm.
Yue pushed him away violently.
And how many times do I have to tell you that I can’t get up in the morning”, he answered, looking at the man from above, he was about one head taller and his black eyes were intimidating.
The man sighed and walked away. Other demons around were laughing. Yue took a plate and walked to one of the table in the corner.
Move”, he said.
The three younger demons sitting there stood up in a hurry and ran away with their plate as soon as they could.
Always in such a good mood in the morning”, another demon said, sitting on the rock in front of him. He put his glass of water upside down on the table, locking the water inside. Yue swiped the glass away with one blow making it explode into thousands of pieces on the next table.
The other demon laughed.
It’s my table”, he said, “get lost.”
As a Nephil, you should be a little more polite”, the demon in front of him said his hair, dressing up on his head and taking a strange dark blue color. “What if someone decides to kill you in your sleep?”
Yue looked at him, without rising up his face, his all black eyes near to his eyebrow.
They can always try”, he said with a menacing deep rocky voice.
The other demon laughed again.
If you’re so strong, prove it, some people are starting to think that it’s just an attitude you are giving yourself”, he said.
What people are saying is irrelevant, not my problem”, Yue said.
Let’s verify then, I’ll beat the shit out of you”, the demon said smashing Yue’s plate as strongly as he had smashed the glass of water and making it fly to the next table before standing up.
Yue stood up slowly, pushing himself up with both hands on the table. He was carrying is head bent over his left shoulder, slightly showing his neck to his opponent, still looking toward the table with a grin on his face.
Bring it on”, he said finally looking up.
The round black shape in the middle of his eyes had changed to the shape of flames dancing slowly. A bowl of boiling water was growing in the hand of the other demon, it reached Yue straight in the face vaporizing in the air and hiding Yue’s face in white smoke. The demon started to laugh.
How pathetic you couldn’t even ditch….” He started, but he didn’t have time to finish his sentence that Yue had projected himself against him, pushing him hard on the rocky wall of the cave, carrying him up with a hand around his neck.
He shook his head, making the water stuck in his hair hit the face of the other demon burning him.
Trash like you don’t measure up”, Yue said softly.

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