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Sunday, October 26, 2014

WeWriWar 74 Demon and Fairy




Hello everyone!

Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. How are your Halloween events going? Mine are going fine for the moment, I only have few more to attend.

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. Now we are having some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week with the boy's mum telling him not to touch the ball.


I didn’t come near him, he came to me, I didn’t do anything wrong,” Seti yelled.
The heat came to his hands, like that day. He had never forgotten. He left the ball roll on the floor and hid his closed fists in his pocket. The Chaos was yelling at him to let his anger out, to let go of everything. The Chaos said that everything would improve if Seti listened to him. But Seti was facing his father, and he couldn’t let his old man be right, and show him something wrong was happening. In this uncomfortable position, he learned to fight the Chaos and he learned that his father was too scared to do anything to him.

Answer to last week's comments:
I know we are all siding rightfully with Seti, but you'll understand his dad a few chapters later, at least if we ever get that far. 


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16 comments:

  1. If we get that far? Unfair! ;) I get his dad's point too. Uncontrolled emotion like that could end with his son locked up and someone hurt.
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  2. It seems as if Seti is growing and getting stronger, he now has more control over the influences around him.

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  3. You're doing a wonderful job, Linda, of writing conflict into his family dynamics. Should he trust the chaos...or shouldn't he? :-) Good 8!

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  4. Great tension and character elements, well done!

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  5. I feel so bad for him. You can really feel all his emotions here. Great snippet.

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  6. Interested to see the dad's side of this. I do feel for Seti. Nicely done. :)

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  7. I love the way you're using all of these mythological characters in your story. It's very inventive. Sounds like Seti is just getting in deeper and deeper.

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  8. Poor Seti, this guy really needs a break. He's really a good kid...demon...well you know : )

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  9. You can't help but feel sorry for Seti with his need to feel accepted by others and his wish to control the Chaos so other did not fear him. Well done.

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  10. Interesting. I'm definitely curious about the story. :)

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  11. Like how the emotion inside almost becomes another character.

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  12. Well I'm still all in with Seti. He's doing the best he can!

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  13. How he fights for control and wins is remarkable. Father to son conflict forever. Beautiful, Linda.

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  14. Poor Seti! feeling all alone like that without any support especially from a parent is the loneliest of feelings. great 8! can't wait to reada his dad's reasons.

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