Sunday, October 19, 2014

WeWriWar 73 Demon and Fairy

Hello everyone!

Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday. Yesterday, I went shopping and as a result, I have a major headache, I can't go shopping without a headache, so I don't go shopping too often... Way to save money. But that shows why Seti has a headache so often, I guess.

In the previous episodes: Seti let the chaos got out of him as the father of his sister's fiance threaten to break the engagement. Wild, he flies to the beach to see the only person near whom he can get rid of the Chaos without pain, the fairy Kallisto in the Human world below his. He can only observe her through a tidal pool. But this time, she is in danger. Trying to rescue her from a snake, Seti lands in the world below. However, as Kallisto tries to touch him, he flies away back to his hidden place on the beach and listen to Kallisto's conversation with her best friend Kelpie who once again proposes to her and is refused. Kallisto needs to choose between Kelpie or going back to the fairy world to marry prince Kordelius. As the night comes, Kallisto goes home and so does Seti and of course his parents are all weird... (Remember, Seti used his forbidden power and left without an explanation... ) Then Seti was mysteriously pushed in his room, in the dark and apparently turned blind. For the past few weeks, Seti is trying to control the Chaos who wants to take over his body. Now we are having some flash back to explain the relationship between Seti and the Chaos. 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start where we left off last week with the boy's mum telling him not to touch the ball.

Seti didn’t know what was happening, what was so wrong with him that he couldn’t even touch a ball? He was angry at everyone: the other kids for throwing the ball at him, the boy for not taking the ball back, his parents for not letting him on the blanket having the pick-nick with them, the boy’s mum for not letting him play with the ball, his father for apologizing as if he had done something wrong. The Chaos was there, amplifying the anger and starting the headache.
We have to go home now, you ruined everything,” his father said.
For the first time, Seti had found the strength to answer.
I didn’t do anything wrong,” he said.
What if you had done it to the boy? How many times do I have to tell you not to come near people?” his father said getting angrier too.
  Answer to last week's comments: 
The thing is, Seti was conditioned by other people around him to try and look "normal" and so he hid the Chaos. But as even with doing his best it's yet not enough, you never know what can happen.

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  1. Great snippet this week. Poor kid, his dad just doesn't trust him.

  2. Poor, poor, Seti! So much emotions here. Great snippet.

  3. I hope he gets control of the Chaos! I always wish the best for Seti, you've really got me hooked on this character. An enlightening snippet, with the backstory...

  4. No wonder he was getting a headache. Interesting snippet this week!

  5. Very good. I can sense his confusion and frustration.

  6. I feel so bad for Seti! Having to live like this his whole life. Great snippets showing his early days.

  7. This Chaos is a bummer. I hope it conquers it.