Sunday, April 6, 2014

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 45

Hello everyone !
Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
April is here and I'm participating to the A-to-Z challenge and Camp NaNoWriMo, I'm finishing Blue Angel which draft can be find here. And last Friday I got eliminated from LJ Idol, blah :P.

Anyway, today, Kelpie is getting mad.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get rid of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. Kelpie had just ask Kallisto if he has already told her about Kordelius' ugliness. Seti is still around listening to their conversation. Kelpie is going straight to the point. Seti wanted to run away, but still decided to stay. Kelpie continues to tell Kallisto she should married her so she decided to give him a love test. Kallisto asked him: "What do you love about me?" Seti's answered in his head, then we saw Kelpie's answer to Kallisto and the argument that follows

Here are my 8 sentences, we start just where we left of. (With creative punctuation to fit in.)

Well, you’ll have to choose between the two of us anyway,” Kelpie said without looking at her walking to the pond again, “I’ll come back tomorrow I hope you won’t be so full of secrets.”
He jumped in the water head first and the last thing of him Kallisto saw was his black horse tail floating few second at the top of the water before disappearing, he had shredded his clothes in the process. She sighed and looked at the fairies flying again all around her. Kelpie wasn’t their favorite person. He was too boorish with them probably because even if he couldn’t hear them, he was still able to see them and having them move around in silence was driving him crazy.
He’ll never get it. Couldn’t you help a little bit with that?” She said sighing.
The fairies just emitted crystal-like noises.

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  1. Those fairies should get their boots on and give him a kick up the ass. :-)

  2. fairies tend to be enigmatic like that ;-) great snippet!

  3. I agree with Shelly, come on fairies help out here!

  4. The fairies have it right...he's boorish. And maybe she has another choice Kelpie!

  5. Great snippet! I agree with Sherry, but also wonder exactly what she would like the fairies to do.

  6. I love the fairies' crystal-like noises. Seems like they aren't very helpful, though!

  7. He's assuming only two choices, still.

  8. Those darn fairies refuse to take commands. :-) Very visual, Linda. :-)

  9. I love the world you're building!