Sunday, March 16, 2014

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 42

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Today, let's hear Kelpie's answer.
In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get rid of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. Kelpie had just ask Kallisto if he has already told her about Kordelius' ugliness. Seti is still around listening to their conversation. Kelpie is going straight to the point. Seti wanted to run away, but still decided to stay. Kelpie continues to tell Kallisto she should married her so she decided to give him a love test. Kallisto asked him: "What do you love about me?" Seti's answered in his head, then we saw Kelpie's answer to Kallisto. Will Kallisto betray her secret? 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start just where we left of. (With creative punctuation to fit in.)

Kallisto blushed and looked at the sky briefly. Seti blushed too. Was she really able to see him or was she just hoping for him to be here? In both cases, he felt insanely happy.
If you loved me you wouldn’t look at me the way you do,” she said.
And how would I look at you?” Kelpie answered getting annoyed with her girl’s nonsense.
You would be looking at me just like he…” She paused realizing that she almost said it.

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  1. Uh-oh! She almost spilled the beans there. :) This is a charming excerpt.

  2. Oh-oh! Here comes trouble;). Sweet snippet.

    On another note, I love the four-leaf clover, but it makes it incredibly difficult to read the blog. Just something to keep in mind;).

  3. Are they about to make some progress here?

  4. Saved at the last second! Nearly spit it out. :-) Good snippet, Linda. And I LOVE your falling shamrocks. :-)

  5. Interesting bit.
    Are you head-hopping on purpose? Three times in three sentences is a lot.

    Fun story.

  6. Interesting bit. :-)

    Are you heading hopping on purpose? Three times in three paragraphs is a bit much.

    Fun story.

  7. Hope Seti was listening closely. :)

  8. Uh-oh... If Kelpie caught onto what she almost said things could get... "interesting."

  9. Ooo, Ooo, say it! Don't leave us hanging. ;)

  10. Oh so cute. He's gonna get the idea that he means something to her for sure : )