Sunday, February 2, 2014

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 36

Hello everyone !

Welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
My new 365 photography challenge is doing well, I even managed to get up early in the morning to take picture, if you want to have a look see here.
Anyway, let's continue with our story.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get rid of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. Kelpie had just ask Kallisto if he has already told her about Kordelius' ugliness. Seti is still around listening to their conversation. Kelpie is going straight to the point. 

Here are my 8 sentences, we start just where we left of.

“I know, I know…” Kallisto tried to interrupt glancing quickly at the sky again.
She was wondering if her white knight was here to hear that and wished he wasn’t.
“I’m really the best for you,” Kelpie said stopping the swing. “I know you’ll see it soon enough but you need to hurry to agree with the terms so that we can celebrate our wedding before your fifteenth birthday, you don’t have much time left…”
Seti was looking at her anxiously, his heart seemed to stop beating in his chest and he didn’t remember ever feeling so sad. Even when everybody walked away from him out of fear the very first time, he coped with it. He had heard the story before but now he had met her, it was different. A part of him wanted to run away and never come back, to forget about everything that happened with her.

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  1. Poor Seti! I hope she says something to set his mind (and heart) at ease.

  2. Oh, I feel so sad for Seti! Stop the wedding!! Lots of emotion in this snippet Linda. Good job.
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    (Sorry I missed you last week!)

  3. OK, Seti, dude, seriously, time to man up and take a risk with her! Total Seti fan here but I want him to be bold LOL. Great snippet, got me all riled up on his behalf, can you tell? I don't want him to lose this great girl.

  4. Sad for him to hear her deciding between two other suitors.

  5. Is there an age limit? Sounds like it.

  6. Interesting story! One of my first snippet readings. I'm Looking forward to reading more.

  7. I doubt he's a quitter but he's certainly going to have his work cut out to save her from this.