Sunday, December 8, 2013

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 29

Hello everyone, welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
This month I'm participating to NaNoWriMo and all the draft of my new WIP Blue Angel will be available daily here. Sorry for not commenting on everybody last week, between NaNoWriMo and the 6 week challenges, things have been a little hectic.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get ride of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. 

Here are my 8 sentence:

“It’s just that something happened and I’ll never tell you what it is, no matter what because you will start talking and talking and talking and say bad things until I get sick of it and I don’t want that to happen today. I want to go to bed tonight wrapped up in my happiness,” she said looking straight at Kelpie.
“I want that too,” Seti thought. “Sleeping wrapped up in happiness. It should be a really comfortable blanket.”
“Tell me, tell me! I’ll behave, I’ll just listen and I won’t make any comments,” Kelpie started with an innocent look.
“I’m sure you will,” Kallisto said.

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  1. I love this: "Sleeping wrapped up in happiness. It should be a really comfortable blanket.”

    Will she share? Great snippet.

  2. I agree with Karen, I loved that sentence too :-)

  3. Me three!

    I also like that she knows Kelpie too well to want to listen to him. :D

  4. Funny and just like best friends, mischief will come. Delightful eight.

  5. Ha! Yes, this line "“Sleeping wrapped up in happiness. It should be a really comfortable blanket.” Outstanding! Good snippet, Linda!

  6. I think she knows Kelpie pretty well. But, if she tells him about it, then Seti will know what she's thinking too : )

  7. The "wrapped in happiness" idea was just wonderful! Great 8!

  8. I agree -- that is a great line. And I feel so sorry for Seti...

  9. Awesome 8! Definitely want to know what happened. Also, love the falling snow on your blog :)