Sunday, December 1, 2013

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 28

Hello everyone, welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
This month I'm participating to NaNoWriMo and all the draft of my new WIP Blue Angel will be available daily here. Sorry for not commenting on everybody last week, between NaNoWriMo and the 6 week challenges, things have been a little hectic.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get ride of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. 

Here are my sentences with a special edit to fit to 8.

“I don’t know, but this is different, really different,” she said looking at the sky again.
Kelpie stood up and started to look at the sky too.
“What are you looking at?” he said.
“Nothing, nothing,” Kallisto said blushing looking back in front of her and she started to rock on the swing.
“What happened to you? You are acting all strange,” Kelpie said giving her a suspicious look.
Seti was looking at them more and more interested. Was she really like that because of him?

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  1. Ah, good! He's catching on!

  2. Seti may not know what he wants, but I think Kallisto is starting to realize how much she needs a certain someone! :)

  3. Aw, he's finally getting it. Great eye-opening scene. :)

  4. Interesting section! Its interesting to see the interaction between them. :)

  5. YES, Seti, you're getting it! (I like Seti a lot LOL.) Fun snippet!

  6. Hmm, what *is* she looking at? Definitely she's acting strange--wonder how long it will take him to truly catch on.

  7. "Was she really like that because of him?" Nice-- very candid. It reveals myriad emotions. :-) Good 8, Linda!