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Sunday, November 24, 2013

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 27



Hello everyone, welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
This month I'm participating to NaNoWriMo and all the draft of my new WIP Blue Angel will be available daily here.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get ride of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. 


Here are my sentences with a special edit to fit to 8.



“Don’t you hear what they say?” Kallisto asked.
“I already told you I need to be in the Fairy World to be able to hear them,” he answered a bit annoyed.
“It’s still strange, you are the only one with this problem,” Kallisto answered.
“Well, you’ll still have to tell me what happened that made you so happy,” Kelpie said wanting to change the conversation. 
“I don’t know, if I’ll tell you, I kind of want to keep the secret,” Kallisto said with a sigh of pleasure.
“Since when do you keep secrets from me?” Kelpie said looking at her deeply and abandoning his casual attitude.
  
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7 comments:

  1. Secrets in your mythical land. Fine eight.

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  2. Oh what's he going to do about that? I like that she doesn't tell him right away :-)

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  3. I know what she means about wanting to keep the secret to herself, we women are good at that! Lovely snippet!

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  4. Kelpie may not like what he hears...

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  5. Hmmm... Kelpie seems to be a bit put out at the moment.

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  6. I think she wants to keep the secret of Seti all to herself. :) Can Seti see them talking?
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