Sunday, November 17, 2013

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 26



Hello everyone, welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
This month I'm participating to NaNoWriMo and all the draft of my new WIP Blue Angel will be available daily here.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get ride of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away then notice the arrival of Kelpie. 


Here are my 8 sentences. Today, let's introduce a new character.


“Don’t come too close you’re all wet,” Kallisto said laughing.
Kelpie shook his hair in front of her face splashing her with some more water.
“I know you like that,” he said laughing too.
“Just for today, I can’t get mad today,” she said looking at the sky through the fairy tree branches.
Kelpie sat on the ground his back against the trunk and started to play with the grass. A little fairy came to play with his hair but he pushed her away. She seemed a bit shocked and flew back to sit on Kallisto’s shoulder.
“And what happened today? The fairies also seemed pretty excited,” Kelpie said.

  
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16 comments:

  1. I can't help but wonder how jealous Kelpie is going to be when he finds out about Seti.

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  2. "... the sky through the fairy tree branches."
    Good line.
    I like that description.
    Well done!

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  3. Could it be someone's birthday. ;)
    I like how you show the character state of mind with their words and actions.

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  4. Interesting eight. This reader is fascinated by your imagination.

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  5. I look forward to this conversation! Great imagery in this scene!

    And.... Happy Birthday! Hope you have wonderful day!!

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  6. I love the playfulness of this piece! =D

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  7. Oh, Kelpie's going to find out he has no chance : )

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  8. If the fairies are excited it must be big.

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  9. Don't think I've seen this character before.

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  10. Nice excerpt. Intriguing characters. Looking forward to reading more.

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  11. Will Kallisto be willing to share what has her so excited? Intriguing snippet.

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  12. I don't know that I'd like a fairy messing with my hair either... but that fairy seems a little upset.

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  13. Great description, and I definitely want to know more about the faeries. Enjoyed your 8!

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  14. Ooh! The description is great, but I love the way the happiness and excitement shines through. Great work and hope you had a great birthday!

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  15. Great addition, Linda! Give Seti a little competition, and give her the opportunity to prove how much she loves Seti! Nice snippet :-) Good development.

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