Sunday, November 3, 2013

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 24

Hello everyone, welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.
This month I'm participating to NaNoWriMo and all the draft of my new WIP Blue Angel will be available daily here.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get ride of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house, which scares Seti a little bit while Kallisto seems to consider that he is her best protection. He decided to fly away. 

Here are my 8 sentences. We follow Seti back to his world just where we left last time. Kallisto is having a visitor.

She was smiling at him all the time and she said that he was her hero and her white knight. If she knew what he had done that day and that he could do it again, she would have behaved a lot differently. But he didn’t want to think about that, he just wanted to remember how good it felt down there, to have someone who didn’t looking at him as if he was a monster. Even if it had to be the only time, it was a good time, even better than in his dreams. He smiled at her and listened to the music again, her healing music, the only moments when he could really be himself was when she was near him. He heard the noise of something huge going out of the water. He knew that noise too well. It meant that the Kelpie was back.
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  1. Well done, but can't help but wonder how it would have played out as dialog rather than narration.

  2. Interesting. I'm glad that he liked what had happened when he was with her and I can't wait to find out what's happening next.

  3. He's obviously got it bad for her and she for him.

  4. I want to know what evil thing he'd done...that he might do again. And what's a Kelpie?

  5. "...even better than in his dreams." There is magic at hand. :-) Nice snippet. Lot's of information. Good 8, Linda :-)

  6. I'm late getting to a few myself this week! :)

    They music soothes the savage beast. Maybe she has what he needs to keep in control. Not a good thing the Kelpie is back! Will he need to go to the other place and save her? How will he feel once there? Looking forward to see how this plays out this weekend.