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Sunday, October 6, 2013

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 20


Hello everyone, welcome to Week-end Writing Warrior and Snippet Sunday.

Let's have a little recap of what happened in the preceding episodes.

In the previous episodes: Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get ride of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style which scared everyone around except Taram who had been spying at the scene from the stairs with his twin brother Torin. After the confrontation, as always when he has a headache, Seti flew to the beach and fell asleep near the tidal pool. When Seti waked, he saw Kallisto facing a snake he managed to get through the barrier and stop it from attacking her, at the moment he is about to kill the snake, Kallisto tells him to stop and had him let the snake on the other side of the barrier. Then Seti had an unexpected reaction but Kallisto didn't going to let him go that easily. Kallisto seems to have a very strange combination of people taking care of the security of the house.

Here are my 8 sentences. Kallisto is a being a little stubborn.

“No, I mean you,” she said raising her hand to touch him but she remembered his reaction and stopped before reaching him.
“At least she learned that,” he thought for himself.
“But I’m not always here,” he said.
“I’ll be just fine waiting for you,” she said smiling and sitting on the swing.
“What if I don’t come back?” he answered. He didn’t know if he would ever be able to cross the barrier again once he went back to his world.
“You are my white knight falling from the sky to rescue me, so each time I need you, you will be here I don’t need to be afraid of anything ever again now that I have you,” she said softly.
 
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22 comments:

  1. She certainly has a lot of faith in him.

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  2. You made me curious about your story. Nicely done.

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  3. She seems rather confident that she will see him again.
    Nice 8!

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  4. It seems like a few more dangers are coming before they can be together. Nice foreboding with Kallisto's last line.

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  5. What a declaration. I wonder what he'll say about her confidence in him. Nice 8.

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  6. I like the flow of the prose. Nicely done!

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  7. She expects so much from him, hope he can deliver! Lovely snippet.

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  8. Interesting snippet. Can't wait to see Seti's reaction to that last line.

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  9. Seti needs to believe as much as she does...but then I like Seti a LOT. Fun snippet, a little wistful.

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  10. She is trusting and yet confidant. It makes me wonder if she has dominant powers. :)

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  11. emotional dialogue between the two. the one line in quotes sounds like its his thought and not talking. you might separate it with bold or italics without quotes to keep it from looking like speech. great 8 Linda

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  12. I agree with others - she seems to be a very confident, but trusting person. She's intriguing! And I do hope she's right...

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  13. I'm loving her confidence and I'm so curious what Seti's reaction will be. Oh boy.

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  14. Just because she believes that doesn't make it true--but I bet he'll make it back to her anyway.

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  15. That's quite a statement of trust! Very romantic, too. :D

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  16. "white Knight falling from the sky." I like that. (Don't remember if you have a captcha, but I won't try more than once if you do.)

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  17. Nice exchange here. Good eight!

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  18. Awe, it's a happily ever after moment. ;-) But it is a fairy-tale, right. :-) Good 8, Linda! And thanks for the advice on my wewriwa post!

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  19. Sweet moment! Definitely felt the stubbornness ;)

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  20. Ah. They seem to really care for each other. :)

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  21. Kallisto is an interesting personality. I'm thinking he is quite confused by her. She seems strong, yet not with her comment to him. She is very confident he will be there is she needs him. But can he get back? Nice snippet Linda.
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