Wednesday, September 25, 2013

Hump Day Hook 10: Attic Mirror

It's Wednesday Hump Day Hook again. Find the other writers here. It's also Mid-Week Tease, you can find the other writers here.
If you miss my other hooks, they can all be found here.

We will continue with Attic Mirror. Today Hitomi is thinking that she is becoming crazy, she just heard some voice coming from apparently nowhere...

She startled as she had thought herself alone and looked at the door. Nobody was to be seen.
“Maybe you will need a bit of sewing at the bottom”, the voice said again, “It seems a bit torn, but I can’t really see properly from here.”
She turned around again. It was the voice of a boy and it was definitely coming from behind the mirror. She turned around to take a look but didn’t see anyone.
“Where are you?” she asked.
“Just here, in the…” The voice marked a little hesitation and asked “mirror”?” 

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  1. ooh, he seems a little unsure about that. Great hook, Linda! :)

  2. Interesting scene and a great tease!

    Thanks for joining in the fun, Linda!

  3. curious about the voice in the mirror. good tease! :) Casey

  4. Great snippet! I'm always interested in those who talk back to the unknown. I'd just scream.

  5. That's an interesting reaction Vallory. What would you do when you are done screaming?
    I literally can't scream, I just lose my voice when I'm scared.

  6. Hmm, an interesting predicament and a great hook! :)

  7. I am the mirror? Nice hook!