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Wednesday, July 10, 2013

Hump Day Hook 1: Demon Soul


I decided to join a group of writers posting a hook of their work on Wednesday and here is my first participation. Find the other writers here.

I'm posting a little part of Demon Soul. Enjoy!


"She sighed deeply and dried her tears; he was just an empty shell. She had read so much lately, her way of thinking had changed. But even if he was just an empty shell, his soul was still here somewhere in this world or another and wherever it was she was going to find it. Her new knowledge tortured her; she was imagining his soul in the worse possible places. She had been having nightmares for weeks, she had been dreaming with opened eyes barely noticing the world around her and she had been waking up at night covered in cold sweat. She needed to find it back and to protect it, no matter what it took. Nobody would care for a demon's soul; nobody would ever care but her. She saw it and now it was her responsibility."




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12 comments:

  1. Some nice emotion in this. I am really intrigued. Welcome to HDH x

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  2. A very emotional hook! Congrats on your first HDH! :)

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  3. She seems so sad, I hope she finds happiness. Great hook

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  4. Emotional hook. Nicely done. Welcome to HDH

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  5. Welcome to HDH!
    A lovely first hook, full of emotion and heartbreak.

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  6. Welcome you will love it here! Great hook!! I adore Demons!

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  7. That's very touching how much she cares for him. I'm glad you joined our group - welcome :)

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  8. Welcome to the HDH group! Nice hook!

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  9. Welcome to the HDH Group!

    Nice hook with a lot of emotion!

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  10. Welcome to HDH. Great snippet, well done!

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  11. Welcome to HDH! Great snippet here ... lots of emotion!

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  12. Congrats on your first HDH! You're suggesting an interesting world here. Keep it up.

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