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Sunday, July 7, 2013

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 9


Hello Warriors and dear readers, welcome to the first WeWriWar of July.
Thank you so much for all the comments you left on last week-end snippet. I started camp NaNo July to continue my never ending Vampire story. I received another critique for the beginning of Demon and fairy which you can read here with my thoughts about it. You can win a signed copy of Demon and Fairy by participating to Mich's Summer Mystery (WARNING: the mystery may contains Rhinoceros and weird grammar) 
I'm also creating new dolls of my characters for my etsy shop.
Now let's go to this week snippet, more on Demon and Fairy.

In the previous episodes, Seti was in pain and flying to see Kallisto who is the only person who can help him get ride of it. He remembered how he had met her the first time but unfortunately this time it was late at night and she was nowhere to be seen. Seti couldn't spend the night on the Beach and decided to fly home not noticing that another demon entered her house. We followed Seti and discovered his chaotic bedroom before meeting his family for breakfast. They were arguing about Seti's sister's arranged wedding being canceled by the other family and Samira was crying. Their father said that Seti would just have to apologize. and we learn what Seti thinks about the situation. Seti met the twin's father and gave him an unexpected apology demon style. Today we continue almost just where we left him, Taram and Torin had been spying at the scene from the stairs.


Here are my 8 sentences.

Of what was once a desk only remained a strange sculpture. Seti opened his eyes to look straight at the twins’ father’s. 
“Everything is settled, the outcome will be Samira’s choice, it is nice to have business with you,” Seti was able to mutter with a voice strong enough to be taken seriously. 
He made a sign for his father to walk to the door, his old man took some time to realize that his son’s crisis was over. 
“That was so awesome man, I hope I’ll be able to do that too one day,” Taram said from the stairs. Torin pushed him with his elbow. Seti didn’t say a word as they walked out; he was gritting his teeth tight, trying to forget about the headache. The Chaos was asking for more freedom. 

I hope you enjoyed today's excerpt and see you next week for more of Seti's adventures. I'm not telling you anymore what will come next week because I always change my mind.

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19 comments:

  1. Interesting story. Love the last line; time to unleash the chaos!

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  2. The Chaos was asking for more freedom...probably not a good thing. :)

    What cute dolls to go with the tale. Your creations?

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  3. I really like the last line--gives a great image for what's (possibly?) causing the pain in his head.

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  4. Realistically, headaches often accompany people who are exposed to much Chaos... very good scene-writing!

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  5. Love the mini dolls! So cute! Another great snippet, Seti has my total sympathy.

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  6. Things are getting out of control here, but Taram doesn't seem to see that.
    That makes me hope he never gets those powers, I can't imagine what he'd do with them...

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  7. What an interesting last line. Quite brilliant.

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  8. Love "The Chaos was asking for more freedom." So much packed into that one sentence.

    Love your dolls!

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  9. Love "The Chaos was asking for more freedom." So much packed into that one sentence.

    Love your dolls!

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  10. Great 8! Interested to learn more about Chaos. Very cool!

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  11. The chaos is a coming again real soon I'm thinking. Great last line.

    History Sleuth's Milk Carton Murders

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  12. Chaos asking for more freedom? Uh, oh, I smell trouble. Great snippet and I love the dolls!

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  13. Seti really knows how to "negotiate" the terms:) Wish I could do that too!
    WriterlySam

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  14. Great 8. I can't wait to see more of what is to come.

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  15. Chaos wants to be unleashed. Your dolls are wonderful! So creative :-)

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  16. The demon seems to be possessed by the demon of chaos! Nicely done!

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  17. Great snippet and I love the dolls too!

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